Not exactly done done, but done

Soooo, I finnaly got Return into a shape that I like. I hit the points that I didn’t like in a way that I like a little better than I had.

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I’m not entierly sure that last sentence makes sense.

I might put Elves up in PDF format soon, and then when some of you have read that I can put Retun up and see how people like that.
I might have to put Twins and Brothers & Sisters up again too. Be bad to put up the third and fourth book if you’ve never read the first and second.
I could use some feedback though, because that would be helpful.
Then I can start on Flying Saucers and work my way up to Last Titan (whee for having the story names without having written more than vague notes for the story!)

I think actually, I’m going to go back to work on Jack Collier stuff, try and get it into some kind of shape for publication, which would be cool, but possibly not, there are too many commas in this sentence, and I don’t care, my masters gone away!

Cripes, my brain feels currently fried.

Partly it’s the cola (too much caffine and sugar after a long break) and partly it’s the fact that I’ve blown my nose so hard my left ear is humming (if you know what I mean, you know) and partly because I’ve just got something that didn’t work into a shape where I think it does work.

WOW!